Thứ Tư, 30 tháng 7, 2014

- TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE IDEA OF REPLACING SPORTS BY INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY AT SCHOOL

Both sports and information technology are part of our life, several schools decide to replace sport subjects by technology . Some people think that this policy has a positive effect on children's education while others claim that it make national economy drop dramatically. I strongly disagree with this statement for the following reasons.

First, It is believed that information technology positively affects children's education. When being equipped with computer , children can access to high technology at the early age . So, they have a chance to enlarge their knowledge and creativity . Ironically , another drawbacks are well seen in this policy. Instead of using computer to study seriously , they might play games online or access to unhealthy websites. Besides, when sitting in front of computer screens for a long time, children can suffer some dangerous diseases like obesity , heart- attack or eyes-sight problems.
Secondly, businessman and companies gain more benefits from this policy. Only because of learning information technology can children  achieve computing skill and other skills to apply for big companies after graduating from university. With people having high skilled, companies will generate more money to develop other industries. Paradoxically, No sooner do technology appear  than government have to invest a great amount of money in computer and train teacher to teach students.
Finally , In terms of psychology, parents will feel happy when their children learning information technology which unpopular in their generation. In addition , Some children who are bad at sport subjects  feel fair because they always have to receive bad marks on this subject. However , This policy is not unfair with some hard working children. Because, by virtue of playing sports, these children can have a chance to take part in international sports events.

To conclude , I greatly disagree with this policy from financially, educationally and psychology
 perspectives.




Topic - DISCUSS THE PROS AND CONS OF LIVING FAR AWAY FROM FAMILIES



The issue of living far away from families remains controversial. Some people believe that when living far away from families has a negative effect on children's education whereas others claim that this statement make people become more mature. My writing will analyze both sides of this issue.

It is clear from this issue which has seen several benefits. First, In education, people who live far away from their families will become more dynamic. By dint of living alone in a large society, they can accumulate more skills, knowledge and experience. In addition, With members of their families expecting in their effort , they might promote to maximize their independence and self-awareness . Then , they can extend their work performance and social relationships. Secondly, As a result of having knowledge and skills, they might take part in paid job instead of relying on their families' finance . No sooner do people join in working environment than they can earn a living and feel more confident in any environment . Besides, people whose time is arranged comfortably without having to worry for families can complete their work more effective.

However, This issue has a serious drawback because of living far away from families, members of families will not have a chance to take a conversation or share about their life with each other.  Due to being dividing, the rope which to link all member of families together become not tight . Furthermore, this statement affect adversely children's education . For example , my nephew who lives far away from his parent be lured into some social evils. Because he is not controlled by his parent, he plays games online and access to unhealthy websites , which lead to some unwanted consequence . Especially, this problem can endanger national security with the rate of criminal increase sharply. On the other hand, when living alone without anybody next to take care of them,  these people can put their health in danger because of suffering some dangerous diseases like osteoporosis, malnutrition or heart attack.

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that people should consider about advantages and disadvantages of this issue from education , economic and psychology

Topic - IELTS task 2 - Causes and the effects of divorce

Love is part of our life but sometime it become very complex. Some people think that when couples who can hardly believe in each other should think about divorce while others claim that this issue is responsible for children's education deterioration. My essay will discuss causes and effect of this issue.

Social surveys have described family breakdown as one of the most destructive scourges of our time . They can broke up for the many reasons like health, economic, psychology or something . For example, The couples are separated because husbands' or wife's health is put in danger. They can hardly enough health to step together to the ends of their life. Besides , Maybe they have some financial problems , and therefore , leads to the divorce . On the other hand , They also broke up as a result of cheating on husband or wife due to adultery  , so seldom can the couples fall in love when their hearts hardly feel close together.

Sadly enough, as a consequence of breaking up , the couples might spend less attention to their children . These children feel gradually bored and start cramming their heads of games online or facebook , followed by some social evils . Furthermore , With more children being lured into social evils , national security is put in danger. Escalation violence status , as well as the rate of criminals makes government have to waste a huge amount of money to defense industry . Especially , due to the lack of budget to develop countries , the number of unemployed become gradually higher and people's life is endangered. Finally, Only because of divorce ,the world become more chaos.

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that people should consider about causes and effect of this issue from education , economic ,security and psychology .

An example of Bar chart -IELTS

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The bar-chart illustrates the housework done by male and female students in class M103 . In general, the number of female in the housework be done is higher than in male group. For instance , in male group, Know how to cook and wash clothes have the highest number of students with around 80 percent, followed by iron clothes and use a vacuum cleaner with less than 40 percent. However, the least attractive work belong to eat fast food with only 20 percent.
On the other hand, in female group while know how to cook turns out to be the biggest number of students with above 90 percent, the lowest figure is seen in eat fast food with about 10 percent. Besides, althought iron clothes is lower than wash clothes and has 70 percent of students , it surpasses use a vaccum cleaner by 30 percent..