Thứ Tư, 30 tháng 7, 2014

Topic - IELTS task 2 - Causes and the effects of divorce

Love is part of our life but sometime it become very complex. Some people think that when couples who can hardly believe in each other should think about divorce while others claim that this issue is responsible for children's education deterioration. My essay will discuss causes and effect of this issue.

Social surveys have described family breakdown as one of the most destructive scourges of our time . They can broke up for the many reasons like health, economic, psychology or something . For example, The couples are separated because husbands' or wife's health is put in danger. They can hardly enough health to step together to the ends of their life. Besides , Maybe they have some financial problems , and therefore , leads to the divorce . On the other hand , They also broke up as a result of cheating on husband or wife due to adultery  , so seldom can the couples fall in love when their hearts hardly feel close together.

Sadly enough, as a consequence of breaking up , the couples might spend less attention to their children . These children feel gradually bored and start cramming their heads of games online or facebook , followed by some social evils . Furthermore , With more children being lured into social evils , national security is put in danger. Escalation violence status , as well as the rate of criminals makes government have to waste a huge amount of money to defense industry . Especially , due to the lack of budget to develop countries , the number of unemployed become gradually higher and people's life is endangered. Finally, Only because of divorce ,the world become more chaos.

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that people should consider about causes and effect of this issue from education , economic ,security and psychology .

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