Thứ Tư, 30 tháng 7, 2014

Topic - DISCUSS THE PROS AND CONS OF LIVING FAR AWAY FROM FAMILIES



The issue of living far away from families remains controversial. Some people believe that when living far away from families has a negative effect on children's education whereas others claim that this statement make people become more mature. My writing will analyze both sides of this issue.

It is clear from this issue which has seen several benefits. First, In education, people who live far away from their families will become more dynamic. By dint of living alone in a large society, they can accumulate more skills, knowledge and experience. In addition, With members of their families expecting in their effort , they might promote to maximize their independence and self-awareness . Then , they can extend their work performance and social relationships. Secondly, As a result of having knowledge and skills, they might take part in paid job instead of relying on their families' finance . No sooner do people join in working environment than they can earn a living and feel more confident in any environment . Besides, people whose time is arranged comfortably without having to worry for families can complete their work more effective.

However, This issue has a serious drawback because of living far away from families, members of families will not have a chance to take a conversation or share about their life with each other.  Due to being dividing, the rope which to link all member of families together become not tight . Furthermore, this statement affect adversely children's education . For example , my nephew who lives far away from his parent be lured into some social evils. Because he is not controlled by his parent, he plays games online and access to unhealthy websites , which lead to some unwanted consequence . Especially, this problem can endanger national security with the rate of criminal increase sharply. On the other hand, when living alone without anybody next to take care of them,  these people can put their health in danger because of suffering some dangerous diseases like osteoporosis, malnutrition or heart attack.

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that people should consider about advantages and disadvantages of this issue from education , economic and psychology

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